2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Our world today,many many goods have a problem on excessive packing.This problem i think is very serious quietly. however, why would it happen?I think there are three reasons. firstly,more and more people like beautiful things even though they are very expensive.This is a very common phenomenon for people. when we try to estimate a good,we usually are attracted to outside.Secondly,when we visit our friends,we would like to buy gifts which look finer.The last reason,the manufacturers may be try to protect goods from damage. On my opinion,the excessive packing have a good side,also have a bad side.On the bright side,consumers feel good for the goods deeply.the manufacturers can gain added income.however ,the bad side is the waste of resources.And the consumers need more money to buy goods .