2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Though with the rapid development of economy and technoloy, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing, which is a weir contradiciton. There are numerous reasons to cause this kind of situation. First, the increasingly cars and factories cause serious environmental pollution. There is no doubt that the car is convenient to people's life, while two much car on the road will lead to traffic jam, which makes people annoying, impatient, even grievous accidents. Second, the pressure of work seems to drive people to the wall and sometimes they desperately think that it's no way to get out sometime, thus they are more and more depress and perplexed. According to the survey of medical domain, most of white-collar have sub-health trouble for the overwhelming working duty and unfavourable dietary habit. In this way, the measures should be taken to deal with this kind of situation. First of all , when it comes to work or life, learning to handle the pressure by ourselves, we can figure out several solutions to wipe out it, such as singing as loud as we can, taking part in the funny party, doing physical exercise, etc. Besides, protecting our environment by taking the bus instead of your car, which can improve traffic jam in some way. In a word, to have a better life, proper exercise and environmental awareness are needed.