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江苏省张家港市2011届九年级上学期期末试卷写作:亲情问题演讲稿

发布时间:2013-06-25 18:52浏览次数:1981
要求:

假设你正在参加江苏省中学生英语演讲比赛,请针对有些父母亲经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。


演讲稿的主要内容应包括:

认为同学们不必为此烦恼,,希望能够体谅父母的苦衷。

建议以谈话、写信等方式与父母交流和沟通。


注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。


Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
Some of us are having problems with our parents,as they often look into our school bags
or read our diaries.____________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Good morning ,ladies and gentlemen Some of us are having problems with our parents ,as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I think we should not be worried about that .Our parents are concerned for us ,but they cann't find any way to get informations about our lives in school.They want to know what we are doing when we are not in home.And they wonder if we have any trouble that is not convenient to tell them. So we should communicate with our parents usually.We can chat with them ,write letters to them,and so on .Then we will have not those trouble they read our diaries that we don't agree.

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