题目要求:
Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?
题目讲解:
报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。
第一段:开头
第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力
第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压
第四段:结尾
文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分学术词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Though with the rapid development of economy and technology, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing, which is a weir contradiction. There are numerous reasons to cause this kind of situation. First, the increasingly cars and factories engender serious environmental pollution. There is no doubt that the car is convenient to people's life, while excess cars on the road will lead to traffic jam, which makes people annoy, even brings about grievous accidents. Second, the pressure of work seems to drive people to the wall and sometimes they desperately think that it's no way to get out, thus they are more and more depress and perplexed. According to the survey in medical domain, most of white-collars are suffering sub-health for the overwhelming work and unfavourable dietary habit. In this way, the measures should be taken to deal with this kind of situation. First of all , when it comes to work or life, learning to handle the pressure by ourselves, we can figure out several solutions to wipe it out, such as singing as loud as we can, taking part in some parties, doing physical exercise, etc. Besides, protecting our environment by taking the bus instead of your car, which can improve traffic jam in some way. In a word, to have a better life, proper exercise and environmental awareness are needed.