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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；从句使用很棒；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段。
According to advertising discourages question ,i agree two point .first, i think advertising help my life something,such as, children study .we are know it ,to help children study.the second . Advertising maybe help us to know something , for example ,Ugly things .which help us to know a lot of anything is broken , don t believer . which help us to choose the answer. And then, i disagree have one point. because advertising sometimes use the human lost a larger number of money.we will be unhappy,sad,which will be the end unhappy.
