2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足。

Now the online shopping is more and more popular,we can go shopping just clicking the mouth,the goods will deliver it to our hands. It is no hesitate that the online shopping bring much convenience to our life,we have more choices online,and it save out time to go to shop,But it also had the advantage,some goods have the exagaratted description of the goods,when we got the goods we found we are cheated;on the other hand,some goods like clothes,we can't try it on,sometimes we judged wrongly by the picture. For my point of view,I think we should make use of the online shopping to save our time. buy the things that doesn't need to try ,like electronic goods,book,and so on;and we should buy things In the reliable shop.