高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；若注意文中一些句法错误，文章会更不错；作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；请注意分段。

I was grew in a beautiful town there are many trees around,there are clean river where we can see many kinds of fish swimming in it ;The house was small and simple here ,the people work hard but their lives in poverty. Now,there are great changes happen ,tall buildings can be seen everywhere,many factories are built here,in the street,many cars and buses running in the broad road;but environment is polluted with the development of factories ,the green trees are gone ,the dirty water instead of clean water ,so,many kinds of fish is disappeared in the river.I think we must pay attention to it ,we must stop it so that will take the beautiful town back .