高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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I was grew in a beautiful town there are many trees around,there are clean river,we can see many fish swimming in it;The house was small and simple here,the people work hard but their lives in poverty. Now,there are great changes happen,tall buildings can be seen everywhere,many factories are built here,in the street,many cars and buses running in the broad road;but environment is polluted with the development of factories ,the green trees are gone ,the dirty water instead of clean water ,so,many kinds of fish have disappeared in the river.I think we must pay attention to it ,we must stop it so that will take the beautiful town back .