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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文章用词灵活多样，但请注意增用学术词汇，单词拼写还要加强；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。
May 16th,2013 Dear Editor, I am writing to tell you that there are some quality problems about books and services in the library. Yesterday, I bought a Chinese -English dictionary from library whose cover is old and unclear letter.To my surprise,lots of misspelling,when I open the third page of dictionary At first,I did not care too much about it,but later after finishing half of dintionary,which made me strike. So many misspelling mistakes everywhere that I have to stop reading,for which will misinstruct me. Just like an old saying"good books make your life wonderful". However,the fact is quite different.Because of this,I went back the library to replace.As a result,the librarier refuse to exchange with me. As far as I concern,the quality of publish industry need to be improved,otherwise,not only waste a great large number of paper materials,but also the publish company will reuce its reputation soon.Gradually,those who violate the pulishment rules may be run into serious trouble in the further business. Therefore,the first thing that it should be brought into attention for each manufacturers. Yours Frankly, Lily
