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Now,South China tigers are in danger.Because of too much hunting.The main nature reserve is Baishanzu National Nature Reserve,Zhejiang.The number of South China tigers before being protected is very few,and there will be have about 30—60 South China tiger after protecting. In my opinion, we should try our best to protect the South China tigers.For example, we can stop people from hunting.And we should tell people more about the South China tiger so that they can pay more attention to protect the South China tigers. At last, let's help the South China tigers and make them in safety.