2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Recently, with the increasingly of technology in the word, computer become a important part in our life. It makes our life become more and more convenient and interesting,but three are also many disadvantages of it. As a saying,"The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer." we always depend on the computer when we were in trouble such as in study, in work, even in daily life and so on. we begin to get used to searching online instead of independent thinking before we answering to the questions. In the course of time, we begin to give up thinking and we will become like a fool without the computer. What a terrible! We will not be able to make progress even may regress. As I as I'm concerned, we enjoy the computer brings us convenience and fast at the same time don't forget our thinking. We should treat correctly the advantages and disadvantages of the computer.