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The impact of the internet on interpersonal Communication Recently, with the development of the technology , the computer is becoming more and more popular , meanwhile there are has many communicated ways in the life. Now, we can talk to others on the computer face to face, so the internet is a important impact in our lives. Since we have the computer, we often depend on it. When we always release ourselves though it ,such as listening music, watching TV and playing games. Nowadays we can have a small talk with who is far away from us thought the internet, it increase our relationship . The internet is good for our lives, it plays a role in our lives. Now, we can't leave it.
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