2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,most family foster only one child,so the only one child is the apple of their eyes,most parents pay much love to their children,do almost everything replacing of them.I think it is harmful to the growth of a person,the parents can't live with their children for the whole life,they will face to the life by the own finally,so the parents should cultivate their children's independence,How to cultivate the children's independence?I have some suggestions: First of all,the children should be independent in life,they must deal with the little things by themselves in life,for example,they should clean their room,wash their clothes; Otherwise,the parents should cultivate the children's independence of thinking,everyone should has its own thinking,only the oneself can control its life. The independence is the important factor of a man's maturity,so the parents have the responsibility to cultivate the children's independence.