2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

There is a famous remark that Give me six hours to chop down a tree ,and I will spend the first four sharping the owe,which was said by A braham Loncoln.I have learned something from this word.You must possess your ideal and your hardness if you want to make success. As one said that every successful man may have a ideal that can lead us to go to a right way.I supposed that ideal is like a sun that can light the way of succeed.However ,you do not know where you go when you have not your ideal.So I think it is your first step.In addition to this ,you require your hardness if you want to suceed.Hardness do not mean succeed,but hardness will pay back your something .If you do not do hard,what you get is nothing.So you must do your best as long as you mean to succeed. AS far as I am concerned,there are many factors that can take up our future way.But having your ideal and hardness are essential for your success.Only in this way can we make our way go to succeed easily.