高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Great changes have taken place in my hometown.In the past,there were so many trees around my hometown .All kinds of fish swam in the river freely.The houses were humble and the streets were narrow.Now,people in my hometown live in a higher standard of living.A lot of tall buildings are built in modern style.Malls sells fashionable clothes.Cars run on the wide road.But as the industry develop quickly,the environment problem has been more serious.The number of trees decreases and some kind of fish even disappear.So it's our duty to try our best to deal with those problems.