2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；适当增加学术词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。

Computer and man is a hot topic over the past one century,which both arroused people's different remarks.Some people think computer have brought just benefits to people,but some disgree,who think comptuer have got us in a very complex and lazy situation.As for me,I support the fomer. My father was a self-taught mandolin player. He was one of the best string instrument players in our town. He could not read music, but if he heard a tune a few times, he could play it. When he was younger, he was a member of a small country music band. They would play at local dances and on a few occasions would play for the local radio station. He often told us how he had auditioned and earned a position in a band that featured Patsy Cline as their lead singer. He told the family that after he was hired he never went back. Dad was a very religious man. He stated that there was a lot of drinking and cursing the day of his audition and he did not want to be around that type of environment.