2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

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As the portrayed in the picture , the father said that hos was school today . His dauther directly responsed that you can read all about it on my blog dad . Recently the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication has been brought into focus . Individuals more and more rely on internet to communicate with friends. This phomenence has inevitably brought about some negative effects . one of the most obvious is that excessive rely on internet to communitate with people , which is blocks face to face comunitate in real life . And then , people will fail to make friends in reality . Though people talk with friends on internet that is exceedingly convenien t, its will increse distant with friends , which is remarkably terrible . Some immersed in the internet communication that they will be indifferent to others . Anyway , we should reduce communication on internet . Howerey , An advantage of communication on internet is that it greatly convenient and increse our efficiency . In addition to that , this improve our commucation chance with other people , let our easy to communicate with strange people . From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that we should become fully aware of the both sides of internet communication and accordingly adjust their ways of communication .