2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

As the portrayed in the picture,the father said that how was school today.His daugther directly response that you can read all about it on my blog .Recently the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication has been brought into focus.Individuals more and more rely on internet to communicate with friends. This phenomenon has inevitably brought about some negative effects.One of the most obvious is that people excessively rely on internet to communicate with people,which is blocks face to face comunitate in real life.And then,people will fail to make friends in reality.Though people talk with friends on the internet that is exceedingly convenient,its will increase distant with friends,which is remarkably terrible.Some immersed in the internet communication that they will be indifferent to others.Anyway,we should reduce communication on internet. Howere,An advantage of communication on internet is that it greatly convenient and increse our efficiency.In addition to that,this improve our communication chance with other people,let our easy to communicate with strange people.From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that we should become fully aware of the both sides of internet communication and accordingly adjust their ways of communication.