初中英语命题作文真题演练(94):良师益友

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

In my life,many people teach me useful things,such teacher,parents and my friends.They are all important for me. They teach me how to cook,how to learn,how to relax,and so on.But the most important people for me is my friend, John. He is one of my best friends. He taught me how to play the piano,and teach me how to play basketball. He makes me love the basketball. And I won the match last year. Though he have left the China I still miss him very much. I want to say 'thank you' to him. If he doesn't teach me. I will never know that I can play basketball very well. Thank you, my friend.