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I have a good friend.His name is Jimmy.He is very cool.My classmates are kind to him.But he don't like speak.I often play games with him.He is 13.His favorite subject is Math.He like music too.Because it is very intersting.He don't like English at all.Because it has a little difficult.His mother and father are office.But his father is very strong.