题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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As the rapid development of the technology, human's life has changed a lot ,and so many has been taken place since computers come into our life.Don't think so? But on the other hand, computers have impacted so much on us, more and more people become lazier and lazier due to it,and because of it , some of us have developed so many bad habits even dependence on computers, instead we can see ,the development of computer make our life come convenient but it also limited our mind ,how do you think of it?