2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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now,more and more people like shopping ,therefore,online shopping is very fashion .there are some benefits about shopping online .one the one hand ,shopping online is very convenient ,and we can save to much time to do other things ,the most important thing is that we cannot go out to buy what we want .on the other hand ,we need not to go somewhere crowded,however ,it is not means shopping online do not have disadvantages .for example ,we can not swear the clothes first ,if we got the goods that not want ,it is difficult to change . in my views ,we can not buy anything online.