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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
In modern times,there is a phenomenon that many goods are lost on excessive packaging.In daily life,you can realise that many goods are always packaged in delicate boxes,such as moon-cake,tea,wine and so on. It can not give cause for much criticism on excessive packaging.After all,the customers take the guise into a worthy consideration.A delicate packaging always wins the preference of customers.When you are shopping ,it is clear that you will give preference to a goods with a delicate guise within the price limit,especially as a gift.We usually put the packaging as an important reference point when shopping.Therefore,more and more businessmen pay more attention to the packaging in order to meet the customers.That is why there is a serious problem on excessive packaging. As far as I am concerned,it can't be advocated widely on excessive packaging if it is unworthy.After all,the environmental protection plays very important part at present.Whereas,it can't totally repudiate,all in all,the customers are always on fire for something beautiful.As the going says:" Fine feathers make fine birds while the tailor makes the man."
