2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Now,online shopping has become a kind of fashion.More and more human are willing to online shopping rather than go shopping by themselves.With the develop of social and science,human being has command computer kill and like surfing the internet.And also many people like to online shopping increase Online shopping has advantage and disadvantage.On the one hand,online shopping more cheaper than the shopping center,and human could shopping anytime no matter where they are places.Online shopping will save us money and don't waste our time.On the other hand,online shopping not at all is true,because we can't tough the goods beforehand shopping only though the online picture and comments.Sometime we feel disappointed when we don't buy pleasure goods online. As far as I'm concerned,I'm willing to go shopping in store where we can choose our goods and will be happy and pleasure.