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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear sir. I have learned a new product of your company which item is 5670 in a EXPO held in New York between Dec. 15 to Dec.22 . And I am extremely interested in it. Please send us a price list and instruction. I will appreciate you so much if I can establish business relationship with you. Yours sincerely, Hubin
