文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;从句不足,简单句比重高;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: Dec. 23, 2008 To: sales-department@hotmail.com Subject: to check your product list Dear Mr.Johnson, We have received your 3000 products, but it should be 3500 according to NO. 35 order which we have already signed. I have not received another 500 products. Please check your product list and your early reply will appreciated. yours, Wang Haiyang