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It is widely accepted that the Internet on interpersonal Communication have a good impact.What's more ,it changes our habit.However,someone believe that it is not good. On the one hand,some people hold the view that the benifit of internet such as keeping communication without face,playing games .On the other hand,a great many people insist that the Internet is not ture and it will bad for our sense. From my perspective,however,i think that the Internet is necessary.Therefore,we should do it
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