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it's generally believed that strong will is essential to one's success. I do think so. tracing back to the ancient times, we can see many great people achieve their success at very high cost , even at the cost of their life. No one's way to success is smooth, some may encounter many difficulties to their success. At this case, Strong will plays a very important role in achieving success. it encourages people to move on even though there are many difficulties waiting for them. Students have no exception. if you want get high mark, you have no other ways but study hard. study is a very tough task, no one can rely on luck to get what they want.