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字数:300 满分:100分
作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用学术词汇,望继续努力;有效的运用了一些复杂句;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Bread provides content and satisfaction to our stomach; Books meet the needs of our lonely souls. Yet as for the form our density, ambition is nothing to be compared with. Ambition is a direction which is your leading goal.Through out the life,the earnest wish will determine the future orientation.Have you ever hear about Lu Xun ,who is a famous patriotic writer and the modern literature founders in China. When in Tokyo he was just a medical student,but with concerned about our country and care for the fate of our nation,he determined to give up the medicine to study literature. With a pen as a knife to wake up the suffering Chinese sleeping soul . Finally, he became a master in literature , made a significance difference on the cultural revolution ,and being called as the soul of nation .He fellow his ambition and succeed to shift from medicine to literature, and was wildly recognized as one of the world’s top ten literary giant. Ambition is a power to resist the temptation; the spirit to encourage us to overcome the obstacles .Only the most desire can give one the energy and the strong self-control. Taking Lucy and Lily the good friends for example. Although Lily studies the double degree in the HUST, Lily just goes with the stream to have the double degree, and Lucy drive by the desire to become the interpreter. During the class, Lucy not just follows the teacher wandering in the knowledge sea, but also has her own unique insight. By contrast, Lily always absent-mind in class and feel bored and tired. After keeping up for 3 weeks, Lily decide to give up her double degree, however Lucy determined to be a translator because she feel really over the moon in the class. Ambition make one’s potential to full. Ambition will provide one with an sense of obligation and duty, which will push you to move forward constantly.To some extent ,the sense will make you hard to meet and difficult to satisfied.That is to say ,when you achieve the goal that you setted before,you will feel not so over the moon,and make you mind to start the other journey.It may be the reason for why Pugh ,who is an adventurer,after swam in the cold water in the Antarctica and north pole,he took another challenge to swim in the Qomolangma Everest Mount.It is the self dissatisfaction that makes one keep moving ,makes one to dig deep in oneself ,makes one’s potential to full. We have to acknowledge that is it the ambition equip us with the road to follow ,the self control and constant power to beat difficulties ,the feeling of unsatisfied to keep going.But for it ,our life will lose the color ane have the vitality sapped.In a conclude ,the ambition fulfills our life ,forms our density.