2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How should parents help children to be independent Today,more and more children were grown because of their parents .at present some parents have did some thing and dealt anymatter for their kid .Therefore,leading to some children lost zhe ability of independent .there are some suggests of how should parents help children to be independent.let us go.