小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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When you're in trouble, who can help you, good friend of course. Tracy is my good friend, she is a nice girl, she likes singing and is good at it. we have many same interestings after class, like drawing,reading and keep communication with each other. I want to keep our friendship forever