2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadys, there is a phenomenon that more and more people can not leave computer along. It means that computer costs us too many time. It is said that there are several reason can explain it. First, computer is the product of science and technology.But every coin has two side. Computer also generate many social problems.There are some instances.Some students are addicted in computer games.Some crimes are done by Internet.