2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays,more and more people use the computer in the work, study and their life.There are many reasons for this phenomenon.Above all,with the development of economy,production costs of computer are less and less.More and more people could buy it.Secondly,people need to find some in formation and do some work with the computer.What's more ,people can,by using computer,save the time. However,following the computer enter our daily life and can't be replaced,people get more rely on it.The children are not able to write, young men waste time in the web or play games. All of those,tell us the relationship of computer and men need concerned and solved.On the one hand,we shouldn't more rely on it.we have ourselve life that have our family,friends and work.we must return our true life.On the other hand,we should be reasonable to use the computer.Let it become our partner and useful tool.