2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；可适当增加从句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段。

From the chart above, we can definitely get a conclusion that the more you learned, the higher your salary would be. The figures in the chart denied the claim that knowledge is useless. However quite a few people still hold the opinion that a higher education does no good to a better job since that there are many university students who can not get an ideal job. 　　What I want to point out is that there is more than one factor that contributes to the failure of finding an ideal job for those who got a higher education. While those who failed to get a better education will hardly succeed in getting a good job because they didn’t get the knowledge systematically and scientifically.