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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadavantages?
文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；请注意分段。
it is undeniable that continuously developing technologies have brought tremendous benefits,especially in information transmission.information transmission has,in many ways,become easier than before. in the past years,peopel just used newspapers to transom own feel,and it spent long time to arrival other place.but today,technology is more and more develop.we can use telephones to send messages or send e-mails by computers.
