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2013年3月2日雅思大作文真题:Information Technology

发布时间:2013-08-01 17:16浏览次数:2401
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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadavantages?


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作者词汇基础扎实;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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it is undeniable that continuously developing technologies have brought tremendous benefits,especially in information transmission.information transmission has,in many ways,become easier than before. in the past years,peopel just used newspapers to transom own feel,and it spent long time to arrival other place.but today,technology is more and more develop.we can use telephones to send messages or send e-mails by computers,and diversified news are readily available.on the other hand,new devices,such as telephones or computers are available in market. however,every coin has two sides.for example,telephones help people a lot in various ways,but at the same time have many negative,even harmful impacts on people.more people send message to cover what they want to say,one of the side effects of too much dependence on the telephone id that people nowadays can seldom spell correctly.

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