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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadavantages?
文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
It is undeniable that continuously developing technologies have brought tremendous benefits,especially in information transmission.Information transmission has,in many ways,become easier than before. In the past,people just used newspapers to transom own feel,and it spent long time to arrival other place.But today,technology is more and more develop.We can use telephones to send messages or send e-mails by computers,and diversified news are readily available.On the other hand,new devices,such as telephones or computers are available in market. However,every coin has two sides.for example,telephones help people a lot in various ways,but at the same time have many negative,even harmful impacts on people.More people send message to cover what they want to say,one of the side effects of too much dependence on the telephone that people nowadays can seldom spell correctly. In fact,provide no solution to instead of the writing.We should correctly deal with the modern science and technology products.
