Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education Pays From this chart ,we can see dramatically that education pays high earnings and low unemployment rate . Above all,we can obviously see that average earnings of the graduate is higher than the college graduates with typical-college degree. There are following reason can accounting for above phenomenon. It is obvious that the high degree means those graduate have a abundant ledger .Meanwhile witnesses that you are an excellent men.Is it the only reason that those students can win a better salary?Another significant factor can attributes to your ability ,experience and your attitude .For the company pursue utmost value just from the profit that you create ,which actually result from your capacity instead of your certificate . AS far as i am concerned ,i think it is necessary to emphasizes the importance of the college graduate's capability and your attitude towards your jib for our bright future .But the certificates cannot be ignored by all of us.