2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句和复合句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

As a phrase saying that nothing succeeds without a strong will.Many people agree with it,including me.And it is strong will that play a important role of making achievement. Looking back the long history,getting a great mission needs someone who has strong responsibility.For instance,some famous students. So,it also has the significant to a student of modern life for having strong heart on studies.We could not become a person that is good for others with studying hard.We should start breeding strong will right now.Like do something difficult for us,do not say give up easyly. Do believe ourself we finally will succeed after hardworking for a long time!