2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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It is argued that shopping online is becoming a trend recently. Many teens choose to shop on line. Shopping online has so many advantages while it also brings many problems. It can save time whereas you needn't go out of the way to the shopping malls. It can save money because you can always buy something at a cheaper cost in the net. On the other hand, you can't see the real commodity, so you can't feel its quality. You may be cheated by the venders. You also take the risk of buying the fake commodity at a cheaper price. In my opinion, I'd like to choose some famous online shopping center, where you can receive better after-sale service. and you'd better choose real shop to buy food and some baby merchandise.