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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段。
fell in love with it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home. I was so curious about the little round ball I began to play it with my friends. From then on, football became part of my life. I often play football with my classmates after We often train ourselves, and sometimes we compete in football games in order to improve our skills.
