2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? In recent years more and more parents would like to do anything for their only one child.They do think it is their duty of doing that. However this phenomenon has already lead much problems.For instance,some students can not take care of themselves well on campus.Even if do not know how to get along well with others.And the explainion maybe is the spoil from children. So nowadays parents should pay more attention to breeding independence of a children. Giving them more chances to do something that they can do.It is more important to encourage children than just have planed well for them.Telling them the importance of independence in our whole life. Teaching them,leading them but replacing them!