2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? In recent years more and more parents would like to do anything for their only one child.They think it is good for them. However this phenomenon has already lead many problems.For instance,some students can not take care of themselves well on campus.Even if they do not know how to get along well with others.And the explaining maybe is the spoil from parents. So nowadays parents should pay more attention to the independence of a children. Giving them more chances to do something that they can do.It is more important to encourage children than just have planed well for them.Telling them the importance of independence in life. Teaching them,leading them but replacing them!