2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

In my opinoin,computer is associated with man.Man produced computer and let is it help us in many things.Computer is clever,but it is made by man.So it can not be better than man.In our life,computer plays an important part .There is no doubt that it make our life more convience. Man also use computer to relax us.We can listen to music and see movies.Except that ,we can get much news from computer .It makes our eyes open and know more things which we do not know. But the importance is that man cannot depend on computer too much.With the time going by,man will lose their own soul.They will do everything by computer. So we must realise the fact which the computer only is a tool.We can live well even if we do not have computer.