初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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My name is Zhang Hua. I'm a middle school student.I like listen to music very much,and I usually your music progamme.I am crazy about the progamme especially the English songs.But I am busy studying,when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio to listen to the music progamme.From the English progamme.I learn many useful things.For example,I learn the cultures of other countries,the eating habits of the USA and English.I like the songs in the progamme very,and I will listen to it every day.The progamme make me relax,make me learn more about the world,and I think more and more people will love it.