初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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My name is Zhang Hua. I'm a middle school student.I like to listen to music very much,and I usually your music programme.I am crazy about the programme, especially the English songs.But I am busy studying,when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio to listen to the music programme.From the English programme.I learn many useful things.For example,I learn the cultures of other countries,the eating habits of the USA and English.I like the songs in the programme very,and I will listen to it every day.The programme make me relax,and it make me learn more about the world,and I think more and more people will love it.