初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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My name is Zhang Hua. I'm a middle school student.I like to listen to music very much,and I usually your music programme.I am crazy about the programme, especially the English songs.But I am busy studying,when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio to listen to the music programme.In the programme of English I learn many useful things.For example,I learn the cultures of other countries,the eating habits of the USA and English.I like the songs in the programme very much,and I will listen to it every day.After listenning to the programme,I learn more about the world,and I don't feel too nerious any longer.Hope your programme will be better and better. Your fans Zhang Hua