初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。

My name is Zhang Hua. I'm a middle school student.I like to listen to music very much,and I usually your music programme.I am crazy about the programme, especially the English songs.But I am busy studying,when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio to listen to the music programme.In the programme of English I learn many useful things.For example,I learn the cultures of other countries,the eating habits of the USA and English.I like the songs in the programme very much,and I will listen to it every day.After listening to the programme,I learn more about the world,and I don't feel too nervous any longer.Hope your programme will be better and better. Your sincerely ZhangHua