题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays ,there is no denying that computer plays a more and more important role in our daily life.People seem not to be able to live without it. And here is the problem :hardly do we resort to computer when faced with difficulties.It is ture that most of us are losing the ability of thinking indenpently. Undoubtedly,we benefit a lot from computer since it have been invented.Howerer,we cannot ingore the disadventages it brings about.To begin with,mang young students indulge in computer games,which included violence ,sex,and even someting illeagul.As a result,they do badly in their study and some may even go to the wrong way in the future.Also,the more time we spend on computer,the less time we acompare our family.According to a recent study,some old parents still feel very lonely,as though their children come back from work.In their words, computers have deprive them of the happy hours with the children.This phenomenon is widely in big city. To conclude,computers,like a coin has two sides,have both advantages and disadvantages.we should make the most of it,and take the disadvantages to the minixm.only in this way can we take over it rather than be controlled by it.