题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays,computer become increasingly widespread.Especially,young people like compter.In colleage,many students have personal computer,and they are accustomed to use computer in almost of every aspect.However,they are too depend on computer too without it. The following reasons possible account for this issue.Firstly,young people easily learn to computer,but they also likely indulge in computer games.Secondly,colleage students don't know how to learn by themsleves.So they always play computer games or chating on the Internet to kill the boring time.Thirdly,the university teachers requid his students do home work with computer ,and then they will submit it by email.Besiders they likely neglect handwrting. In my part, we should take advantage of the computers and aviod the disadvantage of the computer.What's more ,I believe we can seek a favorable measure to deal with the man and computer relationship.